i wish we could work together, this beat is insane.
i wish we could work together, this beat is insane.
This has me entering a part of me that tilts my head and smirk. AND THUS LYRICS! *hope you dnn't mind*
"A dagger I wield as I plan your demise
if only you could have seen though my eyes
we would all see, a great flame
upon a world that is greased up with filth
your head is a pumpkin, my will is to carve smiles.
Journey across the phantom planes
land of the lost, lives grow insane
oh how passive are my delusions
a red quarry in ethereal dreams
is it the great fountain, make whats true in my dreams?
A final solution within a broken time
a wrench in my thoughts, a light to go off
is it not a great blood stone?
A wish stone, from my ethereal dream... "
Haha, don't mind at all. Glad it could evoke lyrics.
I really like it
This is just splendid, i really like it
Too kind. Many thanks, sir.
I can get down to this
mm...Its pretty good on this one. Sounds like the bass is a little empty, need to add a little more background sound to chorus then it would be pretty dope. Overall, I am giving this a 6 out of 10 because I like its catchy tone, it ended nicely, and it all had good transitions, despite the audio tuning is a little off. Well done really, I like your other one better. :)
Its pretty good
It sounds pretty good. Out of all your songs this is the best one, but i have to give it a 7 sounds like its missing something, Also you could change up the ending to hit. Constructive Criticism. Overall, it was really nice, well done with the audio levels and bass hits. I like how you give it that moment of peace before going back into the song, but the end should lightened up a little or kicked up a bit that way the repeat wouldn't sound off. Coming from me, a 7 out of 10 is pretty good. Well done.
it sounds allright
Eh i expected more from the beginning. but its nice.
alright :)
Thanks.
this is cool
lol i find it funny and true lol. nice man
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